Heitoki's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[309 Late Night In O Town]

Audio sounds a bit drowned, you need to sweeten the vocals. Overall, great music theory employed.

tootsie10 responds:

I agree I need to take some more time with the mastering, glad you liked the song :)

[End of Spring]

Nice! ^_^

Its got attitude~

I loved the song overall, just that one square @ 1:30

Make it sumthing else, like a sine or lead ~ other than that its great! ^_^ 5/5

FlamingFirebolt responds:

A sine would make it too static and boring :/ And terrible for the quality even for how it is now. I didn't tried messing with that idea for too much because i though it wouldn't sound good anyways so why bother? Still thanks for pointing that out :P
And 'lead' ? You mean a saw? or what, saws are most often used for leads i suspose i missed your point :/

-firebolt-

[Illusions]

wow nice ^_^

Massive respect on this one man ~

Ur getting good, really good!

Envisage123 responds:

Thanks! Glad you think I am!

[.CheesyTechno.]

Good - needs clarity tho.

You have really great talent, and i like that you can diversify your patterns unlike most ppl - me included.

Wish you would make more :D Or keep to the good stuff.

johnfn responds:

Thanks for the quick review! However, I'm not totally sure what you mean about clarity - when I listen to it, it actually sounds clear (which is pretty rare for me actually :P)

Maybe send me a PM of the offending passage or something? ^_^

[Sonic 3 - Ice Cap]

sweet

Nice mix of melodic rhythm and synth. I love the way u mixed it up a bit and gave you own point of vier on the mix.

There is on thing i think u need tho, better synths, ur saws seem a bit dated. Replace them and u might find urself with a work of art ^^. But thats my 2 rings.

Overall 9/10, u get a 5/5 ^^ nice work.

PS- i like the reggeton beat u added, im mexican and i love that style.

PaulyBFromDa303 responds:

lol thnx. I love reggeton for some reason, even though I am Sicillian lol. I just find it . . . cool.

Ya, I too have a problem with the synth selection but I think I am improving on that, remember this is the first song I submitted, so you can see how I improve LOL.

[Battle of Telrathuln]

Sweet

Liking the pure war and the tention feeling Im getting from this song.

Great work man. I hope u make way more of this stuff.

Diabolo-ical responds:

Wow... a review so soon! I wasn't expecting this. Thanks for the kind words, I'm slowly getting used to this Orchestral kit. This is my 2nd/3rd battle ambience, though I've made 3 chinese tunes too.... which I may upload soon.

[Taiker - Lazy ( Remix )]

(-b'.')-b Nice

Im loveing the ambient effect that u gave your synth. I dont know allot about music, but i do know a good song when i hear it. Nice work!

Taiker responds:

Thanks... my sister just gave me this music program :)

[Fragment # 1]

^^ I love rock

I love rock, no matter what. Your song is good, but you need to lower the voice in the back round.

jeghyan responds:

Huh, now that you mention that I see what you're saying... The vocals are a bit too loud.. I have some trouble with mastering volume levels on my computer because my sound system is awful.... Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad that you thought the song is good ^.^!

[Hall of the Mountain King 0:37]

Nice

Im a fan of HOTMK, and urs was pretty good. The guitar was allitle slow though. A bit faster, and u have a HOTMK masterpiece.

FlameMesial responds:

Cheers!